#8 – My revision on my plan to win back Lake Champlain…

Prompt 1:I want to see a blue lake again, instead of a green one.

Prompt 2: My audience is everyone and anyone in Vermont willing to help me clean Lake Champlain.

Prompt 3: I really love this topic, and I would hate to abandon this topic, but I am open to other topics as well (8.5).

My revised slides.

My “script” for the presentation.



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2 Responses to “#8 – My revision on my plan to win back Lake Champlain…

  • Bob Uhl
    7 years ago

    Well done, Bryce. As I said last time, I’m looking forward to hearing your pitch! One question for you: I’m curious about your thinking behind the decision to target an audience that wants to do something about the lake’s pollution, as opposed an audience that doesn’t. By no means am I suggesting this is a change you should make; I think your focus makes a lot of sense! I’m just wondering why you’ve made that choice.

    One last thing: Could you change your sharing settings for your “script” so that anyone with the link can view? Thanks, Bryce!

    • Mr. Uhl,
      I look forward to giving my pitch as well! I never thought of that of targeting people who haven’t thought of Lake Champlain. I will consider that when I give my pitch. I guess I was thinking that I would try to further motivate people to help me. Thank you!

      I have changed my “script” so everyone can view it. Until next time!


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